Suggestions on site

[belgamo]

Hi members,  I just put together <a href="http://www.rival-gaming.com" >http://www.rival-gaming.com</a> and I want to know what should be added to the site or anything else you wish to comment on, Criticism welcome.LMK Please!

 

[krystalkitty]

Looks great to me!! Very well laid out!

 

[vacant1]

Its a nice layout however on the main page after i click the link I find there is a little to much bland writing.  I was okay for the first couple of paragraphs but then i started losing my concentration.  If its possible to shorten it a couple of paragraphs i think it would be much more attractive.You said criticism welcomed and that is what i think.